I love how mean you and the other characters can be in this game lol. It really feels like theres a proper moral struggle, and I love the different dynamics it results in. Being able to play a morally gray character is really interesting!!
I'm going for a run where my character romanced Tsering and is still emo about him, but like, started using Zihr as a kind of rebound but ended up actually really falling for him- and I LOVE that that feels like it's actually happening and isn't just an internal headcanon. The relationship you build with Checl is also so so sweet I care about her sm. Very fleshed out consequences to choices! Great game, can't wait to see more
I'm completely blown away by the depth and the writing! I couldn't say no to bringing Checl with me (my MC is gonna need someone optimistic and kind for a whole lot of pain he's probably gonna put himself and others through LOL) also related but I love my sweet puppy (I named him Good Boy because that's what he is while being a terrifying beast 🥺)
And I'm very curious how the future encounter with Tsering will go (as of this point my MC just wants to shoot him in the leg and push him off a bridge - you don't get the amount of past vulnerability shown to you without a price LOL) I know we got some lovers of him currently tho so maybe that'll change~
Still doesn't say anywhere in the beginning that MC's from a Spanish speaking family... Why not add that little tidbit in the features? Saves people from having to redesign their MCs and restart the game once you hit the memory scene.
Because it's your character and you can do anything you want with them. What do I look like saying "oh, hey you can speak Spanish so you better go and make them Hispanic"
The fact that you assume someone knowing the MC is from a Spanish speaking family would imply you want the MC to be Hispanic shows you know that information would influence a player into making a Hispanic MC. Note that I didn't say that anywhere in my comment.
I Can't do anything I want with my MC because canon information like them being from a Spanish speaking family exists. I could keep the Korean name and headcanon that they're adopted, but I can't play as them being from a Korean family. And that's a good thing if I was informed of it.
People make MCs based on some unchangeable facts the story provides of them. Those are part of a basic premise. The premise is already set. Informing people of the premise doesn't "force" them to do anything they aren't already forced to.
(This is "I", btw. From your server, if you remember.)
What part of me telling you, "hey your family speaks Spanish", changes your character besides maybe the name? It doesn't change appearance, doesn't change personality, doesn't change anything but perhaps the name. But wait, there's something called cultural mixing. Swedish with Hispanic. AfroLatino. Caucasian and Hispanic. Asian and Hispanic. This isn't even hinting on the fact that a family could've just learned or grew up in a place where both English and Spanish are spoken together. Think Expanse Belter language mixing a hodgepodge of languages.
Literally at most, saying your family speaks spanish means that Moran is mixed. Which means, once again, they can have any name. So, no. You're assuming that I'm assuming people should make a Hispanic character. If that was true, I'd just say "Moran is Hispanic" and I'd actually make it a thing. It's not that deep, I promise you.
If that changes how you, as a reader, plays your character go for it. No one is stopping you from playing that path.
I've literally said it could be a mixed culture situation. And that I Could keep the name. You're the one who implied letting people know the family speaks Spanish beforehand sounds like you're saying " you better go and make them Hispanic". I did not say you're assuming people should make a Hispanic character. I said the fact that you assume that's what people would think reveals you know the information is something that would affect a person into making a Hispanic character.
You can't pretend this isn't information that affects an MC's identity. Something a lot of people would like to know about their MC before already forming an identity for them. If the family was introduced early on in the story, this would not be a problem.
As I said, it's a premise. All other premises is in the introduction of your story. You don't want to add that premise even as an offhand in the introduction part because you don't want to come off as saying "oh, hey you can speak Spanish so you better go and make them Hispanic". What I've said is it does not do that.
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You don't understand... I'm hooked. I could gnaw at my desk. I can't wait for the full release.
Question: What are the threat levels. Are there any meaning to them and is it based on anything or is there a reference somewhere
I love how mean you and the other characters can be in this game lol. It really feels like theres a proper moral struggle, and I love the different dynamics it results in. Being able to play a morally gray character is really interesting!!
I'm going for a run where my character romanced Tsering and is still emo about him, but like, started using Zihr as a kind of rebound but ended up actually really falling for him- and I LOVE that that feels like it's actually happening and isn't just an internal headcanon. The relationship you build with Checl is also so so sweet I care about her sm. Very fleshed out consequences to choices! Great game, can't wait to see more
I'm not sure for pc but I found a glitch in the mobile version when looking at species I can't look at the raza
Officially joined the Tsering-Simp-Club know. #TSC
Thanks for that, I guess. (☞ ❛ヮ❛ )☞
welcome welcome! Glad you could make it
I'm completely blown away by the depth and the writing! I couldn't say no to bringing Checl with me (my MC is gonna need someone optimistic and kind for a whole lot of pain he's probably gonna put himself and others through LOL) also related but I love my sweet puppy (I named him Good Boy because that's what he is while being a terrifying beast 🥺)
And I'm very curious how the future encounter with Tsering will go (as of this point my MC just wants to shoot him in the leg and push him off a bridge - you don't get the amount of past vulnerability shown to you without a price LOL) I know we got some lovers of him currently tho so maybe that'll change~
As a sidenote I love the artwork for the species! Very pretty!!
Still doesn't say anywhere in the beginning that MC's from a Spanish speaking family... Why not add that little tidbit in the features? Saves people from having to redesign their MCs and restart the game once you hit the memory scene.
Because it's your character and you can do anything you want with them. What do I look like saying "oh, hey you can speak Spanish so you better go and make them Hispanic"
i would suggest putting the translation of the spanish text after it. not all of us speak it
The fact that you assume someone knowing the MC is from a Spanish speaking family would imply you want the MC to be Hispanic shows you know that information would influence a player into making a Hispanic MC. Note that I didn't say that anywhere in my comment.
I Can't do anything I want with my MC because canon information like them being from a Spanish speaking family exists. I could keep the Korean name and headcanon that they're adopted, but I can't play as them being from a Korean family. And that's a good thing if I was informed of it.
People make MCs based on some unchangeable facts the story provides of them. Those are part of a basic premise. The premise is already set. Informing people of the premise doesn't "force" them to do anything they aren't already forced to.
(This is "I", btw. From your server, if you remember.)
What part of me telling you, "hey your family speaks Spanish", changes your character besides maybe the name? It doesn't change appearance, doesn't change personality, doesn't change anything but perhaps the name. But wait, there's something called cultural mixing. Swedish with Hispanic. AfroLatino. Caucasian and Hispanic. Asian and Hispanic. This isn't even hinting on the fact that a family could've just learned or grew up in a place where both English and Spanish are spoken together. Think Expanse Belter language mixing a hodgepodge of languages.
Literally at most, saying your family speaks spanish means that Moran is mixed. Which means, once again, they can have any name. So, no. You're assuming that I'm assuming people should make a Hispanic character. If that was true, I'd just say "Moran is Hispanic" and I'd actually make it a thing. It's not that deep, I promise you.
If that changes how you, as a reader, plays your character go for it. No one is stopping you from playing that path.
And yes, I remember you.
I've literally said it could be a mixed culture situation. And that I Could keep the name. You're the one who implied letting people know the family speaks Spanish beforehand sounds like you're saying " you better go and make them Hispanic". I did not say you're assuming people should make a Hispanic character. I said the fact that you assume that's what people would think reveals you know the information is something that would affect a person into making a Hispanic character.
You can't pretend this isn't information that affects an MC's identity. Something a lot of people would like to know about their MC before already forming an identity for them. If the family was introduced early on in the story, this would not be a problem.
As I said, it's a premise. All other premises is in the introduction of your story. You don't want to add that premise even as an offhand in the introduction part because you don't want to come off as saying "oh, hey you can speak Spanish so you better go and make them Hispanic". What I've said is it does not do that.
i wishhh i could be able to subscribe to the patreon to be able to read more but my payment doesn't work, i need to see more of Tsering :(
when is chapter 5 in the other story 3